Thursday 15 June 2017

Brief Development


We are designing a land boat for the purpose so when you are 16 you know how to turn the wheel  of the car and we will know how to use technology.
So what im using for my land boat  wheels is  smooth wood. Im using smooth wood because when its sandy it wont be bumby for the sand and when its rocky  you can change the wheels .


writing a narrative

A long long time ago there was a girl walking on the beach  with her dog, she wanted to find little fishes when her dog barked. Ruby was barking because she saw someone  littering . he put his ice block rapper in the then he put his drink lid into lily wanted to pick it up but the wind blew it away.After 2 minutes she saw a boat far away and shen saw that the boat was heading to a shallow part of the sea then when lily saw a massive rock she was frightened because the boat was heading the MASSIVE ROCK!!!.Lily wanted to do something but it was too late  the boat crashed into the rock.





OH NO!! Said ‘what are we going to do’ ruby barked. After a minute there was pollution coming out and lily saw the little fishes dying and she saw a dolphin die. Lily was crying because she loves marine creatures but she can't see them because they died it was really sad because the marine creatures died in the sea, and she didn’t get to see them before they had died.lily was so sad because that dolphin was her favorite dolphin when it was night time lily and ruby walked home.









When got in her bed she dreamed of fishes with the dolphin and lily was swimming with the dolphin and the fishes.The next morning lily had an idea she told some men to get a water sucker.a water sucker sucks all the pollution go out of the sea so she told them to get there new one from yesterday and when they got at the beach creek they hoped that it would save the marine animals so the tried it.after 2 minutes it worked all the pollution came out but one problem was that the sea animals needed medicine luckly the docter came and helped them with medicine and after one hour the little fishes were back lily and ruby were happy again.the end

what is that?

I think it looks like a time travel shoe and I think it’s made out of magnesium and titanium because those are the strongest metals. And they want their new product to succeed.


Well I think that the problem the shoes are solving  is that when you put the shoes on it makes you fly and when people fall you fly and save them. I think it is used for time travelling so if you're running late for work or a birthday party you just put your shoes on and say I want to go to work or I want to go to the birthday party.





OK! Now i know what this product is a smart shoe it is controlled by your smart phone and featuring a futuristic and urban design. The smart shoe features a self lacing function.which can tighten and untighten.by a click by your smartphone or smartwatch it senses your body weight and age and height.and it knows your temperature. And tracks your steps.and in one day it charges.




I think it a good idea that the makers made this smart shoe because it is really cool to be tracked by your feet and if i was a technology maker i would make a  jet pack that can fly 1000 feet.


In Room 10 we did a grammar practice we had to say different words  to make a sentence and to make our writing better.

Tuesday 13 June 2017

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